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Music Meister: Afterward p15 by PlanetSeasoning Music Meister: Afterward p15 by PlanetSeasoning
FINALLY!!!
I decided to stop fiddling with it and just post it :w00t:
there were originally going to be 8 panels but i decided they were extraneous and would make for too busy a page...

Hopefully it comes across this way but he's supposed to be a ring master... or Ring Meister as I've been calling it XD

Also this was my first time drawing an explosion, so be kind!!!
p16 [link]
P14 [link]
P1 [link]

Everything belongs to DC and Batman Brave and bold, Batman the animated series, Warner Bros. etc.
story is mine...
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:iconweskittykat4evr:
weskittykat4evr Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
:squee:
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:iconcaf77:
Caf77 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is wonderful! Love the explosion by the way!
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:iconblackstallionwoman:
BlackStallionWoman Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Artist
Ahhh!
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:icondreamadove93:
DreamaDove93 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Fire!~
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:iconkaijuart:
kaijuart Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooooh I like the outfit! I love this comic, keep it up :)
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
:w00t: thanks! I'm getting the next page done pretty quickly! so look for it soon :)
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:iconkaijuart:
kaijuart Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your most welcome :) NICE! I wanna draw him in this costume >.> looks fun!
I will watch you :D
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
ooh! you should :nods: it's a fun outfit to draw! it's flowy and dapper ;)
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:iconkaijuart:
kaijuart Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I will! I need to practice >.>
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:iconcooldude104:
Cooldude104 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010  Student General Artist
can't wait to see the next.
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2010
i'm working on it ;) so sit tight
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:iconcooldude104:
Cooldude104 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010  Student General Artist
okay.
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:iconkaseykay10:
KaseyKay10 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010
love the new outfit on Meister

keep up the good work
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010
Thanks!!!
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:iconagentgigglypuff:
AgentGigglypuff Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
Yes! Slowly! So I can savor as many pages as possible!! :D
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
;) I'll see what i can do
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:iconsupervillainlover:
SuperVillainLover Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
EPIC!!!! :iconyayzplz:
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
:woohoo: glad you like it! i'm super excited about what comes next too!
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:iconsupervillainlover:
SuperVillainLover Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
:iconyayzplz:
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:iconagentgigglypuff:
AgentGigglypuff Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
Well, I'm glad I can help. :)... I really, really, really enjoy this comic. I'm always looking forward to the next page. You're doing a great job. :)
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
:love: and I'm super happy that you do!
Thank you for showing your support for so long! I hope you continue to enjoy it as we slowly approach the end
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AgentGigglypuff Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
I also agree that the outfit is awesome... I love how he just waves a red cape of sorts and voila! Music Meister the Ringmaster! :D

The only problem I have with this page is that the lyrics seem a little awkward... Your other lyrics up until now have been fine and flowed just right... I could actually see a song to them...

It's not all the lyrics on this page, though... Just these:

"It's clear you've put Bats to his paces..." I've never heard of that turn of phrase before... and it just sounds awkward...

And then the last two lines...

I'll show him the price of admission,
Is his own demise in a lethal exhibition

Those seem okay by themselves... but for some reason, it seems to clash with the rest of the song... and I'm not sure why....
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
Thank you!

and I see what you're saying about the song. I was trying something new... and I'll admit it doesn't flow the way I'd like.
at first this was a longer song, but I had a friend look at it and edit it down a bit.
I think it flowed a bit better in it's longer version, but they were nessisary edits.

I thank you for your honest critique! This comic is a learning experience for me and I'm always looking to improve my art and writing :)
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:iconchicomarx:
ChicoMarx Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
Love the costume. So much.
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
glad you like it! :)
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:iconladyofthedeers:
Ladyofthedeers Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! Worth the wait :D
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
:D
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:iconladyofthedeers:
Ladyofthedeers Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
He attire are hot.. Like, Damn hot o_o
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
o really? glad you think so ;)
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:iconladyofthedeers:
Ladyofthedeers Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Think so? I god damn know so :D
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:iconleaftherabbit:
leaftherabbit Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome! :D :love:
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
Thank you <3 ^___^
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ToxicMasterpiece Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
GWAH I LOVE IT. fdshafszdvgraw that outfit is so awesome!! :iconeeeeeplz:
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
yay! glad you approve~!
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:iconsilencelabyrinth:
Silencelabyrinth Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
OMFG MUSIC MEISTER RINGMASTER
.....My brain just exploded.
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
Oh no O.O I'll help you pick up the pieces!
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:iconsilencelabyrinth:
Silencelabyrinth Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
No no, nonono
I'll just stay here....in pieces....
I think you invented a new kind of sexy here though. Just don't tell me he gets a whip too, or I will become completely incoherent XD
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
*clears throat* ... take a look at the contents of the ring meister's hand, my dear friend... :heart:
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:iconsilencelabyrinth:
Silencelabyrinth Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
OH OH OH OH MY GOD THAT I DON'T EVEN HAVE
*Implodes*
:heart:
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
oh dear... i don't even know how clean up an implosion... O.O
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:iconsilencelabyrinth:
Silencelabyrinth Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
It is a puzzle janitors have been handing down from generation to generation
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
the easiest i think would be to mop up what's left and throw it in the wash... dunno what to do about the scorch marks though...
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:iconagonis100:
Agonis100 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
Another great addition!
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
:iconsmugplz: but of course... XD
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:iconthe-roses-of-water:
The-Roses-of-Water Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
It has returned. I enjoy this page very much so! :D
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
glad you liked it! :hug:
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:iconkilian777:
kilian777 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
Something tells me I mean.
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:iconkilian777:
kilian777 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
Something he's just gonna get punched in the face.
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:iconplanetseasoning:
PlanetSeasoning Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
you know something tells me you're on to something... :iconsmokeplz:
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:iconseoulchan:
seoulchan Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
omg this page is full of so much BAD-ASS!

And his new outfit is hot.

*high-five*
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